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Trying not to feel,
Trying not to hurt,
Trying not to cry,
This is how I felt.
I couldn't breathe,
I couldn't move,
I couldn't scream.
The shock was too much to bear.
This couldn't be real.
I was so numb,
He was so cold.
His lifeless eyes stared into mine,
As if to say, "Forgive me."
I'd give anything to hear him say that again.
If only I had known.
If only he would've told me.
Maybe I could've stopped him.
Could've saved him.
His blood had drained.
The pool stained my skin,
As I reached down,
To hold him in my arms,
One last time.
©2009 ~Artashir
:iconartashir:

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T-T

This is really sad and depressing I know. Please *sniff* leave comments. *sob*

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:iconslovic:
Is this based on a real event? Even if it isn't, its very touching. Nice imagery.

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If I comment on your stuff... Please comment on mine. Lol!
:iconartashir:
No. This didn't actually happen, but it's part of something I'm working on.

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I am the dark angel....
But I am not evil.
:iconslovic:
Cool.

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If I comment on your stuff... Please comment on mine. Lol!
:iconceiga:
wow... it's so... sad...
good work ^^

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Nemo my name forevermore...

[link] :D
:iconartashir:
Thanx for the fav!

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I am the dark angel....
But I am not evil.
:iconceiga:
:glomp:

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Nemo my name forevermore...

[link] :D
:iconblckkatt13:
...;_;

So... touching. TT__TT WHYYYYY??!!!! It's so sad!!! You truly are a fabulous writer. One day, you'll write a tragedy that causes the tears of millions... For now, my inner child will be crying in the darkest corner of my mind... (Oh, thanks a lot. You've turned my inner child emo!) You really are on a whole nother level from other people your age. *sigh* You amaze me. You really do.

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